Posts Tagged ‘Writing’

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Making $P@MM3R!!1!

April 24, 2008

It’s late.  I’m tired.  I have to get up tomorrow and teach before presenting Spammer to the Writing with Video class.  As part of our final project, we were asked to comment on our creative process over the last several weeks.  I wanted to do this in the form of another “video production diary,” but I’m just too tired!  I may still post another one with some clips and a “trailer” for the film, but it might not be until next week due to my busy schedule!

Filming was done a couple of weeks ago.  Tonight I am done with the editing.  How does this make me feel?  Good, in some ways.  I’m happy with the way the project turned out, although I think it still lacks polish.  I didn’t have time to adjust any of the colors or make a soundtrack – those things will have to come later.  My goal for this class was to at least have a final, edited version of the film that I could present.  I believe I accomplished this.

I had a couple of minor set backs during the editing process

I ran out of hard drive space on the “loaner” Macbook that I’ve been using for the film editing.  To solve this problem, I had to basically uninstall anything that wasn’t completely necessary to complete the film.  I was working with very large clips to preserve the quality, so that took priority over anything else on the hard drive.

While trying to clear space on the hard drive, I accidentally deleted thirty clips from the film.  Luckily, these clips were all still on the camera, but it took me a couple of hours to find them and put them back in sequence.

I also had a problem with the climactic section of the film (where Spammer reveals his occupation to his date).  For some reason, every time I tried to edit that clip the computer gave me an error message, and not a helpful one either – it just said “General error” and stopped whatever I was doing.  To solve this problem, I ended up having to go back to the source material, reload the video from the camera and start that section over.

Overall, I would say that my process was fairly organized, but I tried to be flexible about things; in other words, I tried to maintain a balance between control and improvisation in all aspects of this film.  While I was filming, I focused on controlling the environment, the lighting, the camera angles, etc., but I gave the actors freedom to improvise for the most part.  There were very few pre-scripted lines in the film.  The entire date conversation was improvised by the actors, and Spammer’s phone conversation was also improvised (I was on the other end of the phone).  The only scripted line in the film was Spammer’s final statement to his date about the nature of his job, but even that was partially improvised.  My reason for choosing not to script the action more closely was that I wanted there to be a certain element of awkwardness to the humor.  I wanted it to seem natural and off-the-cuff.  I also wanted the actors to be a little uncomfortable, since that’s how their characters were supposed to feel.

When it came to editing, I had a strong concept of what I wanted to do floating around in my head, but I didn’t make any storyboards.  I kept fairly detailed notes during the process so as not to forget things, but these were more technical points.  Most of my time was spent synching up the multi-frame sections of the film, which I think worked out very well.  In fact, while I think some parts of the movie plod a little, I’m very pleased with the multi-frame parts, and think they were very successful.  In particular, there’s a segment where frames of spam messages overtake the screen and Spammer curses as he pounds his delete key to make them disappear.  This clip alone took me a couple of hours to get right, but I think it was worth it.

While editing the film, I had two priorities – I wanted to tell the story well, but I also wanted to be efficient with my time.  There were a few bits that I had to cut out (and more I may still cut out) that only served to make the narrative drag on too long.  My goal was to get the film down to fifteen minutes.  I was close (17:52), but didn’t quite make my goal.  It’s possible I’ll still be able to shave off those three minutes, but I’m not too worried about it.

Going forward with this piece, I have two goals:

1) to take advantage of whatever criticism I receive in class tomorrow and improve the editing, and

2) to add all the finishing touches (soundtrack, color correction, end credits, etc.

Hopefully, if all goes well, I’ll be able to have the final version online and available for download in early May.  I want the film to be available in higher quality than what Youtube allows, so rather than posting it there, I’ll probably make it available as a torrent that people may download through the blog.  I’ll have more details on that once everything is finished.

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Writing Across Media

April 20, 2008

I received an official offer today from the head of the Writing Studies program here at U of I to help develop a new class for next fall, entitled “Writing Across Media,” which I will also get to teach! This was very exciting news, as the alternative was for me to teach a section of Business and Technical Writing, which doesn’t quite align as well with my research interests. I’ll be meeting with a team of grad students and professors over the summer to develop the curriculum for the course which will involve composition in various digital and print media (writing, film, design, etc.).

Coupled with my Desktop Publishing course (which the head of the BTW program gave me free reign over for next semester), this means I will be teaching two multimedia composition/design courses in the fall!

Too bad I’ve got papers to write and assignments to grade, otherwise I’d go out and celebrate! Guess that’ll have to wait until after the semester is over :P

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The Best Decisions

April 19, 2008

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Windward

April 11, 2008

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Blue Morning Haze

April 11, 2008

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Found Writing, or Email is a Dada Happening, or My ‘W’ Key Has Honey on It

April 10, 2008

I Will Save Myself from Agitation

Nor did he follow it at once
with the cure of his body, but delayed that for a little, probably for
the mans sake, as probably for the sake of those present, whom he had
been teaching for some time, and in whose hearts he would now fix the
lesson concerning the divine forgiveness which he had preached to them
in bestowing it upon the sick man. For his words meant nothing, except
they meant that God forgave the man. The scribes were right when they
said that none could forgive sins but Godthat is, in the full sense in
which forgiveness is still needed by every human being, should all his
fellows whom he has injured have forgiven him already.

They said in their hearts, He is a blasphemer.

The officer’s clear, blue eyes sought hers, but she fixed her gaze on the
floor, saying: I am no longer what I was, the young girl has become a
housewife.

A housewife.

The cemetery
of the Madeleine, a terrible pauper’s grave in 1793, was covered
with jasper and marble, since the bones of Louis XVI.

I received this email today, and (going against what some would call better judgement) I decided to open and read it. Maybe it contained a malicious virus that will destroy my computer and everything on it. Who knows? I don’t know the author of the email. I can’t guess her/his intent in sending it. Today I share it with you as an example of “found writing” that “found” me (instead of the other way around). I have copied it completely, making no changes other than to set it in italics in order to separate it from my writing. There’s something strangely beautiful about it that I think has more to do with the circumstances in which it found me than with the content of the writing. It reminded me of a mona lisa with a mustache or a poem exploring the nuance of the letter “W.”

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A Shot in the Dark…

March 25, 2008

I’m not usually one to believe in destiny or prophetic dreams. Maybe it’s just the ex-lit major side of me speaking here, but sometimes I feel like events lead into other events, and our brains subconsciously give us little bits of foreshadowing that we don’t understand until we near the climax.

This past week I’ve been plagued by dreams of past situations gone wrong – and by plagued, I mean every night for over a week. Today I may have been given a chance to make one of those situations right. Maybe? Probably not. I took the chance and the situation is no longer under my control.

I’m not a big Longfellow fan, but this seemed to fit the situation:

I shot an arrow into the air,
It fell to earth, I knew not where;
For, so swiftly it flew, the sight
Could not follow it in its flight.

I breathed a song into the air,
It fell to earth, I knew not where;
For who has sight so keen and strong,
That it can follow the flight of song?

Long, long afterward, in an oak
I found the arrow, still unbroke;
And the song, from beginning to end,
I found again in the heart of a friend.

-WWL

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$P@MM3R!!1! Video Production Diary, Episode Two

March 23, 2008

Also, my swimming stats for today were 1000 yds in 30 min and 1100 yds total. I was mildly hungover today after a wild night of drinking with a lit major and a gang of video game programmers (shout out to Volition), and considering the fact that I’ve swam every day this week, I decided not to push myself :P

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$P@MM3R!!1! Video Production Diary, Episode One

March 9, 2008

Watch the video first, then read the rest…

As promised, here are a few stills from the shoot today. I also threw in some shots I’ve taken over the last week. Sadly, a lot of the footage from today was taken on the camera I borrowed from the art department, and they didn’t give me the proper cable to transfer the footage to my computer, so you’ll have to wait to see that shit. Don’t be impatient! You’ll see it soon enough ;)

I’m not going to tell you what this is. You have to guess.

Fine, I’ll tell you. This is the NASA channel. I filmed it by putting the camera lens flush against the TV screen.

LOL… more fun with the NASA channel.

I let my apartment go to shit this week to set the scene for today’s shoot. Anyone who knows me knows that I’m not anal retentive about cleanliness, but I’m not a big fan of stinky kitchens. I’ll be glad to get all of this cleaned up!

This is not the NASA channel, but it’s the same idea. Just random TV interference.

Here’s Volen looking studious in front of the computer. Since I couldn’t actually show the computer due to my prop situation, I decided to get several minutes of footage of just his face that I can edit in with computer screen closeups to make it look like he’s working.

The sunlight through the trees and the powerlines and whatever the hell else is in the way (a building, I guess?)

Spammer is getting ready for his big date. He’s a bit nervous, so he’s gotta rehearse his greeting in front of the mirror (don’t want to make a bad first impression, eh?)

Another rehearsal shot.

He decides he doesn’t like the way this shirt looks. What to wear, what to wear?

Spammer takes a work break with his good friend Jack. Jack helps make the frustrations of work seem much smaller…

Is it a bug? Or a virus? Or maybe a satellite shooting a laser beam?

As soon as I get the footage off of the other camera, I’ll post some more stills. Until then…

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Racial Stupidity

February 29, 2008

A year or so back, I wrote a post in my previous blog about what I termed “racial stupidity.” I’m not even going to try to find the original post, since Myspace has made searching blogs almost impossible, but basically the gist of it was that: a) some people are overly sensitive to racial issues and need to try to understand others before jumping down their throats, and b) some people are completely insensitive and try to claim that if they’re not offended by something, no one should be.

I was reminded of this for two reasons: 1) I read this blog post about some recent racial problems in S. Africa, and 2) there was a referendum on the school ballot yesterday to determine whether or not the University of Illinois should reinstate “The Chief” as its official school mascot, and I have heard (although this has not yet been confirmed) that the referendum passed by an extremely high margin. I think this comic from “The City” offers a fitting explanation of my feelings on this (click image for larger version):